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Writing 1:
 Hi Jennie!
 I've read  your e-mail and your  desition is fantastic! But I can't go to run with you I'm sorry... As you know I have to carry my brother to school and I'm a little bit bussy but I would like it. Don't worry if you are lazy because I use to be it too and I found a fantastic gym with swimming pool and spas next to your house, it's quite nice and you will always have a coach  for your own like me as well. It's sad because now in batxillerat we don't have time enough to do all those things that we used to do at the ESO so I think that go to the gym teice a week and some week ends would be awesome.
Of course I can teach you to swim, as you know scuba diving is my passion and I would like to teach you. If  you want t we could meet twice a week, do an hour of excercise and swim two or more hours.
Kisses from your partner:

Marta.

Writing 2: 

When I was really small 

Well, When I was a child I use to do silly things like hide for all the house, talk with a banana pretending That it was a phone ... I was crazy ... My best friend and I were living two flats of distance so when she was bored  she came up stairs and played with me, we use to go for the whole building running and calling all the doors, I know, it was wrong but it was funny and We Could not do anything else at These age. We use to go to planet màgic and enjoy together ... I miss all those afternoons and all the clothes That I wear like to wear dresses and the jumpers ... Well I really miss it!